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About Critiquing

Critiquing can be a intimidating task for the beginner. You may feel that you don't have the skills, the knowledge, the experience or the understanding required to write a critique, but this just isn't so. Critiques are at their most basic level only opinion, and even beginners have opinions that count.

Critiquing will benefit your own writing as well. You'll become more aware of common mistakes in mechanics, style and technique and be able to apply these new found skills to your own work. When you are in doubt about a mistake in someone else's writing, you'll find yourself looking up the matter and gaining more knowledge in the process.

It's a win-win situation. You'll help others find mistakes and rough spots in their manuscripts, you'll expand your own skills, and you'll get honest opinions and helpful hints about your own writing.

Some guidelines about posting critiques to the list:
Critiques should be posted within 2 weeks of a submission appearing on the list, preferably within the first week. No matter how late it is, though, if you wish to critique or comment on any submission please do so.

New members should write at least 2 critiques that meet the groups criteria before submitting their own work. After this, you may submit your work freely as long as you keep up an average of two critiques per submission and a minimum of three critiques/commentaries per week.

For example: If you submit only one submission, you should still critique three others. If you submit two, you should critique at least four. These guidelines are of course bounded by the number of submissions posted in a week.

How to Critique

I find the best way to critique a piece of writing is to read it once to get a feel for the story and flow, then read it again with a critical eye, commenting as you go, to better spot the mistakes.

Some thoughts to consider when critiquing:

1. Feedback should be given to a writer freely and objectively. Don't be afraid to voice your opinion, if something doesn't work for you, point it out to the writer.

2. Critiques should be written in order to help the writer become a better writer. Don't give uninformative critiques that say, "you have some spelling errors" without pointing out where, or "I didn't like it" or "the end didn't work for me" without offering an explanation as to why. It is important to offer suggestions for making the piece better, being as specific as you can.

3. Your critique or commentary should be "substantial" to be considered as part of the critiquing requirement. That is to say, your critique must be useful, offer suggestions, and it probably needs to be at least 150 words long in order to do these things.

4. Always remember that there is a real live person behind the writing. Be tactful and polite, critique the story not the author, and don't forget that pointing out the good is just as helpful as pointing out the bad. It does a writer good to know that even if you don't like a piece, there are still some good things to be said about it.

Critique Format

Start out your critique by giving a general comment on the piece. State what you liked or didn't like about, give praise where praise is due, but also point out any major problems as well. Don't be overly gracious, members deserve the truth about how their writing comes across. Also, sum up what you thought the story was about in one or two lines. This can be invaluable to an author in finding out if the direction they've taken is going the way they plan.

If you will be giving a more in depth critique you should include your comments within the text of the manuscript. This insures that the author understands exactly where problems in the manuscripts exist. Be sure to separate your comments from the authors text by using one of the following methods:

Mark the author's text with ">" in front of their lines, and add your own comments below  in the standard Internet form for quoting and replying to e-mail. Example:

>"Please, don't hurt me," the stricken woman whispered
> as the evil overlord advanced toward her prone figure.
>"I'll tell you anything you want!"
This bit of dialogue seems trite and cliche, don't refer to your antagonist as "evil", we all know that he's evil.

Or, alternatively set off you're own comments by surrounding them with some sort of marker that will stand out against the rest of the text. Example:

"Please, don't hurt me," the stricken woman whispered as the evil overlord advanced toward her prone figure. "I'll tell you anything you want!"
***This bit of dialogue seems trite and cliche, don't refer to your antagonist as "evil", we all know that he's evil.***

Just be sure that your comments are easy to pick out when the author scans down through the text.

 

Receiving Critiques

The critiques you will be receiving are written by your fellow members. Their opinion may differ from your own, but that does not necessarily make them right or wrong .What you do with the critiques you receive is your business, but the giving of critiques is everyone's.

I would recommend  that you do pay particular heed to any points brought up by more than one critiquer, generally speaking, if there's smoke, there's bound to be fire.

We encourage writers to respond to critiques received. It often helps the critiquer and others understand a story point from the writer's perspective. Plus, it's nice to acknowledge and thank the person for taking the time to critique your work.

Should you ever be bothered by any comment from another member, please give yourself some time to reflect on it and also to see if anyone else makes a similar comment before responding. If, on the other hand, anyone should make a comment that you truly find offensive in some way. Do not hesitate to contact the group moderators. DO NOT respond out of anger, even if you feel it's justified. It's the moderator's responsibility to deal with such issues. Explain your position and let the moderators deal with the matter off the list.

Critique Resources

Further resources to help you learn more on critiquing

Basic Path for Critiques
basic guidelines and points to consider when critiquing

How to Critique Fiction
An in depth essay on delivering a critique.
Lots of good points. Excellent Resource.

Hardcore Critique Advice
Good article by Author Amy Sterling Casil.
Geared toward critiquing for publishability

How to Succeed in an Online Writing Workshop
Advice on Participating in a Workshop including
how to go about critiquing other's work

How to Deal with Critiquing
Helpful Hints on how to be critical
and how to accept criticism

The Other Worlds Writers' Workshop Basics of Critiquing
Straight to the point advice on how to handle critiquing
from both sides of the pen.

The Turkey City Lexicon, Annotated
An annotated version of the ever popular vocabulary of critiquing

A Central Index of Writers' Technical Terms
Even more terms used in Critiquing

SFWW Critiquing Guidelines
Another basic guide to critiquing
This one from a popular SF writing workshop